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A hot day weakly flaps,
I'm looking through the window.
And see some baba craps,
She crapping like in limbo.

From her immense ass
A lot of shit is shucking...
Half-drunk guys pass
Leading girl for fucking.

The girl is showing fervor,
"Oh Mother," - is her yell,
Ignoring these guys and her,
A muzhik pukes into well...

Over the river, the payoff in a fight,
A cow piss puddle rife.
Two pregnant dogs bite -
Such is the Russian life.

>>6
Wouldn't it make more sense for the lender to punch the person who owes them money?